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Tuesday, September 25, 2007

Terry McLaughlin | A Kiss is Still a Kiss

Terry McLaughlin Ahh, another day in the life of a romance novelist, spending long hours fantasizing about a lingering kiss--that all-important first kiss scene, to be exact. It's a tough job, but if I need some assistance, I can always find a bit of inspiration on film.

Clark Gable bidding Vivien Leigh farewell on a bridge outside Atlanta, Cary Grant and Eva Marie Saint seducing each other on a train--I love to sigh over kisses that hint about forever and last nearly as long. In Learning Curve, I splurged on an I-shouldn't-be-doing-this-but-I-can't-help-myself first kiss scene that spread across ten pages.

Do I want to add a touch of go-for-broke passion to that first embrace? In Moonstruck, Nicolas Cage gets his message across when he upends the kitchen table before grabbing Cher. My hero in Maybe, Baby may not have knocked over the kitchen table, but he sweeps everything on it to the floor, pushes the heroine down on its surface, and sprawls over her before helping himself to a greedy gulp of a kiss.

I love Bacall's sass in To Have and Have Not when she kisses Bogart and then tells him, "It's even better when you help." Because my hero and heroine share their first kiss in a wine cellar, I had some fun with the dialogue in The Rancher Needs a Wife:

"A little tart," he says after she pulls him close for another one, "but not without promise.”

"Bold," she responds later, as he unbuttons her blouse, "but not without finesse."

"Full-bodied," he murmurs as the heroine gets to work on his clothes, "with a surprisingly strong finish.”

Audrey Hepburn and George Peppard got pelted with rain in Breakfast at Tiffany's, and Deborah Kerr and Burt Lancaster didn't seem to mind rolling in the surf in From Here to Eternity. Still, I chose a more comfortable--and drier--setting for the first kiss shared by the hero and heroine in my upcoming release, A Perfect Stranger. It's on a hill in Montmartre, with a view of Paris rooftops on a soft summer evening, and...sigh.

What are your favorite movie kisses? I'd love to hear about them--I'm always looking for some inspiration.

Terry McLaughlin
www.terrymclaughlin.com/

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5 Comments:

At September 25, 2007 10:45 AM , Blogger Suzette said...

Ok, this is the almost kiss which I just loved. The Wedding Date with Debra Messing and Dermot Mulroney. He just talks to her in a whisper as she leans back against the car and though he doesnt kiss her, the look on her face as she beleives he is going to kiss her is so ummmm "sigh" sexy.

 
At September 25, 2007 10:48 AM , Blogger Suzette said...

Here is the line he whispers to her as he looks like he's going to kiss her

Nick Mercer: Close your eyes. Close your eyes. Close... your... eyes. You're safe. You can relax. I'm not going to kiss you. He's gonna be so sorry he lost you, so stop worrying. Forget the past. Forget the pain. And remember what an incredible woman you are. You do that and he'll realize what he lost.
Kat Ellis: Holy crap. You're worth every penny.


I mean he tells her he isnt going to kiss her but the anticipation.....WOW

 
At September 25, 2007 11:00 AM , Blogger Terry McLaughlin said...

Ooh, Suzette, "almost" kisses are nearly as nice as he done deal, don't you think? Building that anticipation...yummm :-). I'm all for heated, lingering looks, too!

I loved that scene in The Wedding Date :-). Great dialogue--thanks for sharing!

 
At September 25, 2007 5:56 PM , Blogger sharon said...

My favorite kiss is in the movie, From Here to Eternity with Burt Lancaster and Deborah Kerr. The emotion and the setting is the ultimate.

 
At September 25, 2007 8:42 PM , Blogger Terry McLaughlin said...

Hi, Sharon--yes, that kiss is certainly a passionate one! A classic :-).

I always wonder, when I see it, how many times they had to film that bit before the wave came in on cue ;-).

 

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