Anne Gracie | On Beloved Books and Banter
I write in a room lined with beloved books - it's like being with old friends. I know chunks of some of these keepers by heart. For some reason it's usually dialogue I remember, some favorite exchange between the characters.
I love the banter that takes place between a hero and heroine, particularly where they're talking about one thing, but there's a delicious sexual undercurrent underlying the whole conversation.
I'm not talking about suggestiveness, but banter as a sexy duel, a form of courtship, a dance, a game that neither can lose. Good banter always makes me smile.
Some books, some heroes, lend themselves to it more than others. For me, it's usually the hero who starts it. For instance, here's an example from my current book, THE STOLEN PRINCESS, where the Regency hero gets the heroine all hot and bothered with just a few teasing words.
She gave him a severe look. "I told you, I have no desire to put myself under the thumb of any man, ever again."
"But it wasn't my thumb I was thinking of." He said it with such a— such a wicked, laughing look she was hard put to know what to say. So she turned on her heel and walked off.
It took her several minutes of marching along as fast as her legs could carry her before she was able to think at all, let alone think of an appropriately crushing, yet dignified response. His words, along with that laughing smile in his eyes, were a pure invitation to sin. She snorted. Nothing pure about it!
* * *
Later she tells him:
"You know perfectly well what I meant by not wanting to be under the thumb. My entire life has been spent under the rule of two extremely autocratic men — first my father and then my husband. Now I have had my first ever taste of freedom, and nothing — no man —could ever taste sweeter than that."
"Is that a challenge?" he said softly.
"No! Do not be so frivolous."
"I wasn't," he said in a meek voice, but his eyes were dancing.
It was the color, she thought irrelevantly. She'd never seen such blue, blue eyes. Like sunlight sparkling on the sea. Another thing that wasn't fair. Men shouldn't be allowed to have eyes like that.
They walked on and, as they turned a corner, the house came into view. Thank goodness, Callie thought. She might have been walking on a firm graveled path, but it had felt in some ways like she'd been negotiating a marsh, full of traps for the unwary.
He was a very dangerous man! She glanced at him and found him watching her.
"I'm so relieved," he told her.
Callie could not imagine what he was talking about. "Relieved?"
"That you're not afraid of my thumbs. I think they're quite nice thumbs — for thumbs, that is. Don't you think?" He spread his hands out for her to inspect, and though it was clearly ridiculous, she couldn't help glancing at his hands.
"What do you think?" he asked.
She gave them a second critical look and sniffed. "All I can see is that your thumbs are rather large," she said in a quelling voice.
He gave her a slow smile. "Exactly."
Callie had no idea why she should blush, but she did. "I think our breakfast will be ready now," she said and marched briskly back to the breakfast room.
He strolled along beside her. "Yes, I'm ravenous." The way he said it, he didn't just mean for food.
Callie walked faster.
* * *
On one level it's a conversation about nothing much, really, but on another, the sexy duel has begun; we can see he's all out to seduce her -- starting with nothing but words. And thumbs. LOL.
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Anne Gracie
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6 Comments:
Ms. Gracie, can I just tell you you write the world's most delicious heroes? My respiratory system is only just recovering from sighing my way through my encounter with Gideon and that was several books ago! You should have a warning sticker "Yummy male protagonist - beware!" on the front of all your stories!
Hi Anne! An appropriate post because you've always excelled at teasing banter and that excerpt is no exception. Looks like The Stolen Princess is going to be another delightful read. Just picked it up yesterday, so I won't enter your contest, but banter is one of my favourite things, so this post was right up my alley.
I love all Georgette Heyer's witty banter, of course. A line from Janet Mullany's Rules of Gentility--hero hands heroine a stocking she has dropped, much to her embarrassment. He says something like 'I assure you, madam, my thoughts were far above it'. Naughty man! I liked him from that moment. Looking forward to The Stolen Princess!
Hi Anne,
What a coincidence, you talking about your Stolen Princess. I'm reading it at the moment...and I'm thoroughly annoyed! People keep interrupting me. They expect me to do thinkgs like go to the office and cook meals and talk to them (just because I'm related to them!) when I want to keep reading. I'm thoroughly enjoying this new book and boy, oh, boy, is Gabe a fantastic hero. Thank you ma'am! I've been enjoying the banter in The Stolen Princess and chuckling out loud, while drooling too (yes, I can multi-task when necessary).
Favourites? Hm. Too many to count. Perhaps if I mention some OLD favourites. Like Christine I love Georgette Heyer for the fun and the wit. Mary Stewart for the vivid places and action and the understanding between h&h. Victoria Holt for my first experience of the gothic romance. Susan Napier because she dares to put her heroines in such amazing situations and bring them out again even stronger (and with a gorgeous hero to boot!). Jane Austen for a read I just can't beat. Is that enough to be going on with?
Annie
Anna, thanks so much for the "yummy" comment. Apologies to your respiratory system, but you do a pretty delish hero yourself.
Christine, thanks for visiting. I'm a huge Heyer fan from way back, and I can quote plenty of wonderful lines from her, too. I haven't read Janet Mullany's Rules of Gentility, but after that fabulous quote, I'm going to have to.
And Annie, the things people expect of a woman reading a book -- outrageous - LOL on your multi-tasking.
I was just talking to a friend yesterday about Mary Stewart's books - is anyone ever the same after reading Raoul? And have you ever read that book of Susan Napier's where the heroine is naked under her fur coat -- and then gets stuck in the lift with a strange man, who of course is the hero. One of the all-time great openings. Thanks for dropping in.
Any anyone who is reading these comments -- all of these generous ladies above are hugely talented authors.
Anne,
I'm about to work on my latest (slow-moving) story but HAD to respond. Of course no one is ever the same after reading Mary Stewart's Raoul. Sigh, now you've mentioned him I want to go off and read him again. As for the Susan Napier story - The Secret Admirer - I'm pretty sure it's one of the best category romances I've ever read. Love that opening.
Hey, thanks for including me in that comment about talented authors. Looking at my mess of a chapter I don't feel like one. I want to sneak to another room and read instead. Especially since Callie and Gabe in The Stolen Princess have just got married and things are becoming very interesting...
Annie
Hey, Madam Gracie, this risks becoming a mutual admiration society! I did however want to say you HAVE to read Janet Mullany's Rules of Gentility. It's fabulously witty and funny and actually has a real touch of the Heyer about it - and as you know, that's high praise indeed!
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